Symphonic metal, advice please :)

[MAXMEDLOW]

Me and my brother are writing some things in preparation of a symphonic metal band, here is a snippet of what we have started. Let me know if you have any advice to give on the mix please Thanks!

 

[RichMinerva]

i actually really like it. guitars could do with being a spot louder...and if you need a guitarist hit me up

 

[MAXMEDLOW]

Thanks man, I will do that tomorrow

And as it happens, me and my brother left a band/kicked the other two out (however you want to look at it ) because the other guys just weren't up to scratch. Me and him just sat down and really nailed it, and this is what came out tonight So if you're local to Gloucestershire then I'll keep in contact, because we will need another guitarist very soon!

 

[RichMinerva]

im in sheffield dude

but drop me a PM i drive etc