This updated version definetly sound better, but when the female vocals come in, the OHs seem a little too loud. About the body of the vocals, just use a harmonic exciter on the 5k region and send them to a delay bus, where you low pass them at about 2.5-3k.
Also a note on the drums: the transients hit a little too loud, I'd use some tape saturation on them, but not too much.