Test "song" help in mix

[pitoga]

Greetings! to all!
first of all sorry for the bad english your about to read.haha
well this isn't a song at all it's just some riff my bro played and i sang some random stuff on top of it (i know i'm not saying anthing and some parts are cliping) well anyways what i would like to know is if the sound is WAY to scooped? cause i usually mix kinda mid heavy and this time trying to emulate Symphony X latest Album sound scooped the guitars, maybe to much

Well any suggestion is welcome and for you to know there is just a clipper and Limiter in the master chain to take the dB's up !!!! just for showing purposes nothing is "final"

ah, and the bass is just a transposed guitar XD!!! my bro left his bass at his drumers home damn.

Well Thanx!!!


http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3530360/Metal Test- lowe voice.mp3


edit:
added new version

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3530360/Metal Test more mids.mp3

 

[ATLA]

sounds cool dude, what are you using for your drums?

 

[pitoga]

thnx !it's addictive drums with samples

 

[pitoga]

anyone? any suggestions

 

[Killzone2kX]

The guitars sound too thin to me. It may fit the style, but they don't seem to have much power in the mix. The drums sound pretty good, although I think the bass drum might have a little too much low end. It seems slightly overpowering.
cool stuff though.

 

[DreamNeonBlack]

Boy, that singer sounded very much like Mike Vescera.

 

[pitoga]

hmm to thin guitars going to check that again as i said I may have scooped the sound to much !!! and for the singer thats me XD and i've never heard of mike vescera XD! anyways i was just singing random stuff ontop in one single take without correcting the pitch ( as you can notice ) well thanx

 

[DreamNeonBlack]

Seriously? Either I'm getting old or there is something wrong with the world.


Mike sang for Obsession, Loudness, Yngwie, Safe Haven and a bunch of other Projects.

http://www.myspace.com/mikevescera


You have the same grit, tone and phrasing in your voice.

 

[pitoga]

I've put an update, tried to make the guitars less "thin". but maybe they are to quiet now, or the voice is way to loud help!