The Fall of Laius (Almost Final Mix) Please Check Out!

mastering is horrible, seriously, i wanted to turn of after 3 seconds...
id recommend backing of ozone (sounds like your clipping the mix).
snare attack is super artificial and really ear fatiguing.
also the whole mix has no bass, 120hz ish thing going on.

id work on these 3 things. 1. less clipping on mb 2.work on snare attack 3. add some bass (try rbass for artificial bass enhancement, or + 8 db @ 120hz) to the whole thing.

hope that helps!