The mix I'm working on right now (death metal). PLEASE HELP!

[Urgul]

Hi dudes,

I have a favor to ask for you. I'm working on death metal project right now. It's only one song. I've a deadline this Friday. My ears are really tired, I'm mixing it for a week right now. Could you judge this mix? What do you think about guitar and bass sound, drums... the balance of the whole thing? What could I improve?

Thanks for all advices!

Here's the song:
https://www.box.com/s/b42861e0f999844b774e

UPDATED mix:
https://www.box.com/s/945ae38d9402595e002d

Please download because box's player sucks

 

[HollowmanPL]

Me gusta;]

Strasznie przypie*dalajac sie bym rzekl, że:
- werbel i tomy sa troche za bardzo schowane - troche rozjasnic vintagewarmerem?
- wiosla (a szczegolnie ich srodek) są za bardzo z przodu.
- troche dołu na stopę bym wrzucił

Ale jak wspomnialem - nie odbieraj tego jako krytyki - pod swoj gust ocenialem.

 

[Urgul]

Dzięki wielkie za opinię! Nie odbieram tego w kategoriach krytyki, a traktuję jako dobre rady
Uaktualniłem mix, jeśli mógłbyś go ocenić, to byłbym wdzięczny

Updated mix: https://www.box.com/s/945ae38d9402595e002d

What do you think, dudes?

 

[Earsforeyes]

I think the drums lack clarity, and the guitars are a bit loud. I would probably scoop the mids just a bit and bring the whole drum mix up a bit. The vocals remind me of Ihsahn and that's never a bad thing. However, I hear weird beeps throughout the whole song? Whatever that is, it's really distracting.

 

[Urgul]

Have you listened to the first mix or the updated one?

 

[Earsforeyes]

The updated one. I listened to both of em but can't remember if the first one had those beeps, I think not.

 

[Urgul]

Ok, thanks a lot, dude! I'll uploaded new version today evening