I'd turn the keyboards down and bring up the pan-flute. Also a lot of guys on here don't like the teabag effect but I think you've used it very nicely. I think if you EQ the dobro and run it though a JCM800 you should be set. Remember to always use parallel compression on the parts you edit out and if you bus the hi-hat to every other track you can get a virtual surround sound thing going.
And MORE FUCKING COWBELL!!!!!
Other than that I'd say it's a great piece of music. Very calming sound and yet very dark. Like the absence of light AND sound....