Trying to improve improvisation.. rip me a new asshole!

[Humidfume]

Hey guys!

REALLY fucking stuck on where to go from here... I really hate my playing right now, can't lead for shit lack of knowledge I guess... Looking for some pointers on where to start etc.

Let me know what you think I did well and what you think I sucked balls at!

Cheers guys!

 

[Habsburgs]

 

[Humidfume]

Thought you'd have known me by now bro. Sitting around getting pats on the back is all well and good but it doesn't improve my playing or give me a direction to focus on.

I'm not interested in compliments I'm interested in people listening to my playing and helping me get better by letting me know what needs work etc.

Don't know what else to tell you.

 

[Habsburgs]

im just playing with you your technique is really good the last thing would be to connect the licks. just go back to basics, slow and simple. right now your improv. sound like: weedyweedly........stops.........weedlyweedlylegato............stops...........and you always stop in the same beat.

 

[Humidfume]

im just playing with you your technique is really good the last thing would be to connect the licks. just go back to basics, slow and simple. right now your improv. sound like: weedyweedly........stops.........weedlyweedlylegato............stops...........and you always stop in the same beat.

That's fantastic advice, thank you so much! I'd have never thought to change the accent beats etc. Thanks man!