turning one of my acoustic songs into a metal song

Reminds me of Candlemass/WHW... maybe a BIT of that band that did Mirage and Verdict of Posterity.

The leads though for the first few minutes, they're not metal. They sound more grungy. Good call on the vocal melodies and the music (drums/main riff)... nicely complimenting eachother.
 
this could become some really good shit if it was professionally produced. is that you singing, too?

yep, it is. I was off in quite a few places, so I'm re-doing the vocals and adding something to the intro, since it's lacking.

CalamityCoyote - nah. used my Beast. I haven't even PLAYED that guitar yet :tickled:

Penguin - Yeah, even though the lead bits aren't exactly metal, it goes well hehe. I'm glad you could pinpoint influences, because I sure couldn't!


hehe and thanks!
 
I feel my dream to know unfold
I see what's left of me deplete

Visions in my head again
Softly stealing my thoughts again

Hearing not a sound
Why would I?
I don't know...
Breathing not a word
How could I let it show?

At my side, panic stays
Always here when I needed sleep

Hearing not a sound
Why would I?
I don't know...
Breathing not a word
How could I let it show?

I am lost in the shadowed silence
I have always feared the truth

Hearing not a sound
Why would I?
I don't know...
Breathing not a word
How could I let it show?

Picking at my brain again
Realizing all the thoughts were wrong again

Happened once before
Could I die?
Would they know?
Crying on the floor
By myself all alone

Someone is there to guide me
Not a God or someone other than me again

Praying to the Lord
Who would win?
I don't know...
Never has he done anything for me
So, why should I give back?

Solved all my fears by myself with no help from you
I will live on without you, so you won't obstruct my view.