I think this is pretty solid overall, but I have one big complaint about something you could easily fix: the reverb time on the snare reverb is waaaay too long, and the room size you've selected may be a bit too big, you might wanna make the room a tiny bit smaller and shorten the time so that the reverb is at LEAST half dead by the time the next snare hit comes in, and then follow that with EQ to get rid of the "Wooshwooshwooshwoosh" I'm hearing (listen to it in the intro). The ring on the snare may be a bit much as well... Otherwise, really good overall in my opinion.