you dont like bad critique dont you
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Any way its nice, just the solo part didnt make any sense to me
I remember the part that supposed to be there in the background
and it just sit weird together, you start from slow than suddenly jump to shredd part and than again back to slow, it doesnt sound fluent all, if the song in general is slow maybe you should consider a slower solo to it, with more emotion in it, it would be hell more powerful.