wat do u think of this for an EP ending?

[jesterroot4]

http://www.lightningmp3.com/live/49441_epicsoloendingmaster.mp3

was a little something me and my guitarist were working on last night.
i havn't mixed it yet. and the playing is sloppy...


wat do u think? feedback would be good

 

[Nebulous]

The ideas sound good. When it's recorded in it's final form, along with the EP, let us know.

 

[Doomith]

Sounds cool, what subdrop did you use ? The track is distored as well. 33, 34 seconds you can hear it easy.

The ideas are cool! How many guitar layers are there ? I think as an ending for an EP this is something you could carry on for a full minute and have a super long fade out. Thats what I imagined when listening to it!

 

[jesterroot4]

cheers guys, a super long fade out was the idea
as for layers,
1 rhythm 90 left
1 rhythm 90 right
1 solo full left
duplicated solo full right with 0.13 second delay

as for clipping, i wasnt paying attention to it as that isnt a proper mix, i was just a rough idea to show my vocalist lol u can hear how everything still sounds mushed together. shall be mixing and doing more to it tonight

cheers for the comments tho guys

many more are welcome

 

[jesterroot4]

the all the guitars were done using wagner sharp,

borrowing a KRANK and 5150 to do all the guitars properly when all the drums are finished.

any more thoughts on this guys?