What do I need to improve on my mix?

[JustinShreds]

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/20400847/rough mix.mp3

Mixed it, listened to it in my car and hated it.
Made some adjustments and I got this. Haven't listened to it in the car yet haha.

Let me know what I should change, please :]

 

[Gujukal]

The mix sounds just a little bit too dark and i think your guitars get drowned by a bit too much bass. Other than that it sounds pretty good

 

[oroinvictus]

Guitars could do with a little less 800hz-ish frequencies and maybe go down a dB or two in volume, they mask the drums pretty hard.

 

[oz_golf]

It's too bright and thin. it might be sound very nice on computer speaker but not on PA monitor.
The instruments are not glue together as one.