what do you think of this mix?

[MultiM]

Hey guys :
I'm 16 years old and this is my very first mix. I composed and recorded this song and I need your feedback guys

The whole song is 7:15, but here's a sample of the song, it's 1:52.

do you think the mix is nice, or there's something missing? I need your opinion.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/5hjj1dy3pns1agu/My Song Test1.mp3

 

[Dtabs85]

I keep getting an error when I click on the link

 

[MultiM]

link is fixed I think

 

[alex-sonic]

Nice try but i wouldn't pan hard left the solo instead I add another rythm track and centered the solo track

 

[MultiM]

Nice try but i wouldn't pan hard left the solo instead I add another rythm track and centered the solo track

hmmm thanks but, I didn't pan the solo hard left, the lead part is centered, but there's a part where there are harmony guitars, one panned left, one right

 

[Jaosix]

Overall pretty good.
I would definitely turn up the bass a tad. Also, the snare could use a bit more body/punch to it.
There's one guitar in there that's panned near the middle that sounds a tad out of control 1:04 I think, could use a little high pass and a bit more compression.
Maybe a little less reverb on the guitars and more on the snare. Sorry..I'm a snare perfectionist. Lol