What is wrong with this mix?

[forsaker]

I need need your help since I've lost my objectivity. Any feedback concerning this mix/master is welcome:
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/106229499/t1.mp3

Thx in advance.

 

[inertia]

It's hard to say "what's wrong" when you don't say what you are trying to achieve. I think there's a little pumping on the kick that sounds like a compression issue but maybe you want it like that. Overall, the mix suits the style of song.. dark and gritty. I quite like it. It's pretty dirty sounding in a good way. The only thing I am not hearing much of is the bass. I can't hear any bass lines at all.

What band is this? I think the song is quite interesting and i like the vocals. The mix has character and it's not overtly clean and sterile sounding like the fashion now.

 

[prabblerabble]

It's hard to say "what's wrong" when you don't say what you are trying to achieve. I think there's a little pumping on the kick that sounds like a compression issue but maybe you want it like that. Overall, the mix suits the style of song.. dark and gritty. I quite like it. It's pretty dirty sounding in a good way. The only thing I am not hearing much of is the bass. I can't hear any bass lines at all.

What band is this? I think the song is quite interesting and i like the vocals. The mix has character and it's not overtly clean and sterile sounding like the fashion now.

I second this a lot. there's a shit ton of clipping and pumping. everything sounds kinda muffled, I understand you're going for a dark feel though. I would just turn down the guitars a bit and maybe let the bass cut through the mix more.

 

[forsaker]

Thanks Guys! I've modified the mix and this is the result: https://db.tt/PqrxSFt1 The guy from the band complains about the bass. He says that the low frequencies are not so present. I have no subwoofer and I would really appreciate if you could express your opinion on this issue. Thanks in advance!