What's wrong with my tone?

Thared33

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Well there really isn't anything 'wrong' with it, but I'm looking to improve it by tenfold. I hear others' tone and there's both this fatness, and this sparkle that I'm just not getting in my recordings. I'm not sure what it is, but there's some definite sparkle missing.

I double tracked this with a dual rectifier and an SM7b. I know that this is supposed to work in the context of a mix and that I should post an entire mix but I think you can tell from this alone that there's something missing.

http://www.yousendit.com/download/Y1RxYnU5bThCSWQzZUE9PQ