Work in progress - Dyatlov Expedition

[poliver]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/5199238/dyatlov_expedition.mp3

This is a work in progress
Please comment!!!
I just can't seem to pull a decent guitar tone for this one, i tried lots of gain - too grainy, tried less - too weak

 

[poliver]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/5199238/dyatlov_expedition2.mp3

was experementing with tones today, and continued improving mix. I feel much better about the mix as the whole now and guitar tone seems to be better but still it feels like it lacks some balls? should I quad track? please have a listen I need other people assasement badly... oh and don't mind half assed singing, that's going to be rerecorded.