Working on my clean vocals expression, feedback?

Humidfume

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Hey guys! Just trying to push myself to get some more emotion into my performances, any chance I can get your thoughts?

Am I emoting well? Boring note choices?

Cheers!




I know what you're saying,
I know what you're doing,
I know that you're trying to help me out,

You can't see what I see,
You can't feel what I feel,
You can't help yourself but still you try,

It so pointless to watch you live this way,
Why don't you just give up your self to her,

It's nothing,
Nothing at all to watch you die,

So save your breath,
 
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