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i dunno bout u guys, but i love writing lyrics or just short poem-like stuff ... n many of u r also in bands ... unfortunately ma drumming skills aren't that good yet, but i'm workin on it ... whatever the case ... so just maybe u might wanna share own comps here n perhaps gain some feedback on them ... n who knows, some good musician (alexi?! :Smug: ) might actually make a rocking song of it ... with ur permission of course ...
so here i go with a short, incomplete, not-so-good text i wrote sometime back ...

Private Suicide:
driven by insanity, driven by monotony
my death is all that's facing me
if i could do just one last thing
i'd slit ma throat n let it bleed
i'd hide away from this damn world
while no one knows what i was lookin for
it takes a lifetime, maybe a minute
to know that all has death in it
no rebirth, no resurrection
no excuses, n no self reflection
jus a never read letter, with jus dead words
bout u n me - my image n myself
 
This one is called Hate Crew Cuntfart

All u idiots can piss off!! Fuck!
I'm a lot cooler then u and then some!
Ur moma weight 400 pounds, fuckin' jau!! jau!
I'm gonna take my shotgun and shoot u in the ass!
Fuckin' hate penis rectum jaujaujau!!1

[chorus]U stink of piss, I'm gonna kill u
U think youre cool but you arent, fuckin' retard asshole dork!
Jerk!
I'm a lot better than u @ guitar!
JAUAJAUAJAuAjAU!!!!!!![/chorus]

U are fat and lame!
I can play soloes and shred and the chicks will go like whoa!
TITTIES!!!!! jaujaujau!1
U think eyeliner is gay but it isnt!!!
and bunch of kids or something camping in the 70's. AWESOME!
JAU! Kill!!

[chorus]U stink of piss, I'm gonna kill u
U think youre cool but you arent, fuckin' retard asshole punk!
Jerk!
I'm a lot better than you @ guitar!
JAUAJAUAJAuAjAU!!!!!!![/chorus]

*soloe*

[chorus]U stink of piss, I'm gonna kill u
U think youre cool but you arent, fuckin' retard asshole punk!
Jerk!
I'm a lot better than you @ guitar!
JAUAJAUAJAuAjAU!!!!!!![/chorus]

JAUJUAjAUAUAJAUAJAUAJMJAUFUCKIN'JAUJAUUU!U!!!!!!!!!!!!1! *superultrasoloe*!!!!!
 
ok, heres a song from our band called Invisible Wounds, we have had only one rehearsals abd haven't got anything recorded yet. but here are the lyrics
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Life, what point to be in here everything is same old
same old pain inside of me being all the time

eternal darkness is calling you to come home
everything is better on darkside
blood,hate,pain everything you need

Its the eternal darkness what roams on the sky and burns the clouds!
devil dances with the angel and the Eternal darkness comes on a form of the Eclipse!

eternal darkness is calling you to come home
everything is better on darkside
blood,hate,pain everything you need

The devil dances with the spirits of war and rises he's sword and split the sea of Blood!
watch when eternal darkness rises from earth and the mighty pilars of Hell
starts the rain of Flame!

eternal darkness is calling you to come home
everything is better on darkside
blood,hate,pain everything you need!

Hate and War here we came! (GO!) Dance with Devil and rip the wings of Angels!
Drink the blood off your Enemies and make them part of yourself (GO!)

eternal darkness is calling you to come home
everything is better on darkside
blood,hate,pain everything you need
 
I love bizarre lyrics, even though this one isn't finished, I'm not satisfied with it yet:

Defiance Thorn

Through final mazes of insanity his mind wandered
Searching for the answer to a question unknown
Again and again he stumbled across his nemesis
In escher's mazes their fears enthroned

As if in a surrealistic dream world
All of them set on a unreal course
Who can tell what's upside down
In an ocean where the fighting's fierce?

An endless caravan flying in the tight rope
As the undead rise to reach a steel horizon
Abstract wisdom will never show us no hope

Forever lost
The enlightned path leads to eternal misery
Marauder cost
Legions of unnamed soldiers shall defeat the king
Down at hand
The twilight of time's close by
Defiance thorn
 
The Last with Pagan Blood said:
i cant sit a nd write lyrics. i can sit and make up fast songs on my guitar. does anybody have any tips on writing lyrics?

try trippin on somethin n let your imagination flow ... whatever your thing is ... whether just cigs n alc ... or coce n hash ... ur choice ... have whatever u like n enjoy some of your fav hardcore sound ... then after a while shut off all sounds (or at least keep it really low), darken ur room, have some nice insense sticks burning n let ur imagination flow ... think about somethin intense n what it makes u feel like ...
that's how i do it ... n i've written around 25 lyrics ... which doesnt mean they're all good :erk:
 
PanzerKunt said:
This one is called Hate Crew Cuntfart

All u idiots can piss off!! Fuck!
I'm a lot cooler then u and then some!
Ur moma weight 400 pounds, fuckin' jau!! jau!
I'm gonna take my shotgun and shoot u in the ass!
Fuckin' hate penis rectum jaujaujau!!1

[chorus]U stink of piss, I'm gonna kill u
U think youre cool but you arent, fuckin' retard asshole dork!
Jerk!
I'm a lot better than u @ guitar!
JAUAJAUAJAuAjAU!!!!!!![/chorus]

U are fat and lame!
I can play soloes and shred and the chicks will go like whoa!
TITTIES!!!!! jaujaujau!1
U think eyeliner is gay but it isnt!!!
and bunch of kids or something camping in the 70's. AWESOME!
JAU! Kill!!

[chorus]U stink of piss, I'm gonna kill u
U think youre cool but you arent, fuckin' retard asshole punk!
Jerk!
I'm a lot better than you @ guitar!
JAUAJAUAJAuAjAU!!!!!!![/chorus]

*soloe*

[chorus]U stink of piss, I'm gonna kill u
U think youre cool but you arent, fuckin' retard asshole punk!
Jerk!
I'm a lot better than you @ guitar!
JAUAJAUAJAuAjAU!!!!!!![/chorus]

JAUJUAjAUAUAJAUAJAUAJMJAUFUCKIN'JAUJAUUU!U!!!!!!!!!!!!1! *superultrasoloe*!!!!!



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