2 shitty riffs, but need ur help

[Deadstar]

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=827662&songID=6930483

I recorded this shit with superior 2 and wagner# 2.. any opinion about the mix is welcome.
I read u guys use often gclip and voxengo elephant to master but i need to know in which way i have to use clipping without damaging the sound...
thx for ur help

 

[Jordon]

Sounds great. I'd say try varying the velocities in the drum track to get a more natural feel.

What are you using for the synths?

 

[Deadstar]

thx, it's rob papen albino, great synth

 

[Jordon]

Thank you, sir. That synth sound is exactly what myself and my bandmates have had in our heads.