The Invisible Guest
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I don't have a problem with the lyrics .. they're fine. I have a problem with part of the story ... something takes place that no mother would allow to happen knowing what she already knows. That's the best hint I can give without spoiling this thing.The STORY idea is fine. I think what the main problem someone would have would be the way it's expressed lyrically, rather than the actual idea itself.
I also think the voice acting is pretty weak overall.
Britt