Because you can't post attachments here, I've posted up a little tale I wrote on this thread
http://www.ultimatemetal.com/forum/lord-off-topic/385728-some-feedback-if-possible.html#post7160230
on the LORD forum. I'm looking for some comment on it before I send it out into the void of short-story publishing. So if any of you have a few minutes to take a look, I'd appreciate it.
Cheers.
http://www.ultimatemetal.com/forum/lord-off-topic/385728-some-feedback-if-possible.html#post7160230
on the LORD forum. I'm looking for some comment on it before I send it out into the void of short-story publishing. So if any of you have a few minutes to take a look, I'd appreciate it.
Cheers.