A little something I composed (Need help and ideas)

[Ryan M.]

I have a project (Nothing serious cuz it's all synth :/) called Kaleidascopic Dream and it's just psychadelic music with some classical tendancies and other random stuff... Haha!

Here are the first 2 songs I did for this project: (Warning... I'm not even 16 and I'm just getting back to composing)
http://www.4shared.com/audio/MkLbyGL_/Midnight_Part_1.html
http://www.4shared.com/audio/rsveepqQ/Midnight_Part_II.html
So... nothing special... a little bit of a snoozefest.
Please critique... nothing will really offend me. :/

Also share ideas... and don't forget... the next installment to this series is A LOT BETTER! So you will be a bit relieved when it's done! .

 

[Krowsnest]

Decent enough to listen to, but a little repetitious


I'd try maybe...layering a few synth-y sounds? give it an even more ambient feel.

There's Definitely Potential

 

[Ryan M.]

Thanks man! I'm actually trying to get better with the layering. .

 

[Ryan M.]

bump

 

[_Gentleman of_the Snow_]

I shall give it a listen tonight, my friend.

I started writing music using Guitar Pro when I was around 15. I still write using the same program (Guitar Pro 3), and I am now 24. The amount of improvement over the years is astounding, and you can hear it with every song. It's really amazing to go back and witness the improvements yourself. Keep it up, man, your work will pay off, and I shall critique after listening tonight!

 

[Ryan M.]

Thanks man... and I'll have to try that out...

 

[_Gentleman of_the Snow_]

Sorry, dude, I've been busy. Don't worry... I shall do what I promised... lol

 

[Ryan M.]

No rush man! No rush... you're not missin' our on much.

 

[_Gentleman of_the Snow_]

I may be over a month late, but I did what I promised. lol

I like it, dude. It's completely different than everything I write, which makes it more interesting to me.

Like the other person has stated, layering in some extra stuff would be cool.
My recommendation would be to create some sort of song structure as well. You have some cool ideas, for sure, but they don't get their time to develope into the next parts.

Keep it up, man!