a short melodic instrumental!

[OpenWound]

http://dl.getdropbox.com/u/1575659/Dur final_eq.mp3

this is a short song that i wrote as an homework in school,
any thoughs on the playing/phrasing?

 

[ASD]

Sounds like old Dream Theater, which is a good thing

Good stuff

 

[Free_Fall]

Coool man. Nicely done.

 

[vinnyme]

Cool man - well performed! Very dramatic & over the top (which is pretty cool... and progressive as ASD put it. Was this for a song writing or production class? Maybe something else?

 

[OpenWound]

Thank you guys!

Asd: nice! haha that was unintentional did you think you something in particular?

free fall: nice!

vinnyme: yea! im attending a music production class, and in it we get songwriting assigments, so yes, it was "both"