A Test Mix For Your Review...

Pretty raunchy bass tone there dude! The mix could use some more drums. The guitars might need some low passing (round the 12k Hz region) and a bit of a scoop in the low mids wouldn't hurt (imo).
 
I could not tell you anything to make it sound better but I love the music as a fan of Metal!!! Once the Bass and guitar kick in together it seems a bit muddy but after listening a few times I really liked it.


Peter