yep,better.. here's some things that really sticked out to me (remember, all those things are IMO, use your own ears
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1.) kick needs more attack/click
2.) snare sounds a bit muffled, add some highs
3.) still not feeling the guitars at all. any chance this is a software emulation?
4.) guitars have a weird pick attack?!
5.) bass guitar needs more grid
dunno if all those points are kinda retared to mention since this seems to be a quite rough mix, but maybe it's of any help. i actually think you could get a real good sound with some further processing out of those drums