advice on this mix?

[bryan_kilco]

did this just for shits and giggles the other day. This is only a small chunk of the end of one of my bands songs. Drums are FL, guitars are amp sim, no bass or vox. I just (quickly) did my first tight breakdown editing on guitars. Give me any advice on my mix....HP/LP on guitars, little bit of comp, limit, gclip on master.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/6443251/STF NEW 2 BDOWN EDIT MP3.mp3

 

[Matt.CL]

guitars has too much treble and sounds too box-like, that plus they are too loud
there's also too much gain. maybe you need to roll back the presence
and add some reverb, but the mix is pushed to hard, it's clipping a lot
try to get something better than FL for drums, cause you need everything to sound fine together
to get a nice guitar tone, i guess you where going for BOO tone?, you are heading there (even though
i don't like that kind of tone for metal but whatever)