Maybe if you dull the top end of the tone down a little? I don't really know, I'm a newb. lol. It sounds good, but idk. There's something with the guitar tone.
The drums, particularly the hihat sounds pretty programmed. Maybe if you went to half time on a cymbal instead of riding the hihat throughout the whole song? Or just fix the velocities of the hi hat if you don't wanna mess with the feel of the song.
Ya i spent little time of the drums. Ill try to make em sound a little more convincing.
I low pass at around 100hz and i boost around 3-4k, and i think theres another boost at 1k. Maybe i should bring it down a tad, these monitors make everything sounds super flat so im always trying to compensate with raising the treb...
I don't know how experienced you are, but I have been trying to "dull" my tones down. I have noticed that a lot of good tones don't have the piercing high end that I was getting when I boosted up in the high freq. I actually low pass and high pass, I don't know if a lot of guys do that, but it works better for me as of lately.
Give it a listen now and tell me if the treble end is still too high. I also velocitized those hats a bit, i had them all at the same velocity before heh. http://dl.dropbox.com/u/4799456/Terebellum.mp3