Any ideas how to spice this up some more?

[smy1]

Hey guys,

currently writing something for a movie-trailer pitch and am looking for some ideas to add to the "chorus"-part (starts at 1:14).

Check it out at: http://www.faderhead.com/blogs/mp3/FHD_Dawn_Patrol.mp3 and if anyone of you has any suggestions on how to improve this, I'd be happy to hear them.

Thanks!

 

[urinebath]

This sounds very good so far. Definately had a mood started. Dark and brooding. Nice. I would suggest the spice you might need would be a melody line to accent the main idea. Like some higher register sounds. Maybe some more orchestral percussion or possible really ugly sounding piano.

Think obscure sounds. Unconventional things that you can layer underneath everything, just to give it that push or something different.

Good LUCK!!!

 

[nwright]

what's the movie about, what genre, etc.?