hey man, the chorus you were right. and the heavy part after the drum and bass break is right. But I think you have the main riff for the verses a fifth up. and that descent doesnt sound right. listen to the shit I have with the song playing. It's at the right tempo. what I got for it is right. I slowed it down to figure it out. the only thing I dont think is right is the bass. on alot of the other stuff we have pretty much the same thing.