Iblys
www.lucidfalls.com
Alright...... so how nice do i have to be to you for you to share your drum samples? also, how many pieces is that kit that you're emulating?
Nugent Goes AOL said:No man, I wasn't offended in the least. I just got the impression from reading your comments that you weren't cool with the fact that some people thought your song could be improved in some ways. But it's cool, I understand...I would most likely react the same way if I put a song of my own up here.
Once again, good tune. Keep 'em coming.
I hope to get some of my own band's material up here within the next few months...but I don't want to jump the gun and post something that I'm not happy with.
Iblys said:Alright...... so how nice do i have to be to you for you to share your drum samples? also, how many pieces is that kit that you're emulating?
Iblys said:Enigma_nocturnus, I seriously wonder, would you send me the samples you used for the drums? Also, whereabouts in Aus are you from?
Do you have an msn id so we can keep in touch via messenger?
Btw, i would appreciate it if you would go find the thread I posted with demos from my band, and have a listen. Very different style of music, but I'd be as interested to hear from you as you were from the rest of us.
Opet said:< criticism >
Can the singer do clean vocals well? I realize that might be out of the question, but it may sound better. The death vocals are OK, but... At first they sounds good, a bit In Flamesy. Then it gets a little worse. The lower growls, like at 1:38, aren't as good as the higher ones IMO.
[No, cleans aren't really Luke's strong point. I really want to do cleans in the parts that beckon there be cleans. But it will just be a matter of whether I can sing and play guitar at the same time. I'm a bit of an unco like that.
High screams are definately Luke's strong point, but they are nowhere near what he's capable of on that demo though. He's still finding his voice again really.]
Secondly, the guitars are great. They don't sound muddy or too simple. The riffs seem hard to do (but what do I know) and there seems to be a good variety of ideas. There's something I heard a few times that sounded weird. It sounded like a girl scream for a second. (at 1:59 and 2:09) Weird = Good for me.
[hahahaha, fuck that made me laugh. Perhaps you have planted ideas in our heads now. Perhaps we will commission a girlfriend to come in and scream for us in those parts. It might be just what the song needs]
Thirdly, the bass is pretty sweet. Not overly done (like some would say Morningrise is), but heard throughout. I like that. It's not slow and boring...something I feel too often about bassist. I like it when a song surprises you and everything stops for a second and the bass has like a 5 second solo. For instance, the bit at 5:40 could have been done like that......or not!
[Thanx]
And Finally, the drums are programmed? I happened to see mention of that by mistake. I wouldn't haven guessed. Some pretty cool ideas there also. I can't say I know what it takes to program drums compared to actually playing them. There are several parts I really like and only a few scarce ideas I don't care for. The majority of it, I really liked.
Overall, if you want a 1-10, I'd give it a 7 to be honest. The eerie beginning at 0:54 is cool, when the heavier guitar comes in, but the wind noises sound sort of bad. When the vox start, it's good, but after a while they loose something. They sound too strained perhaps.
I know that's not what you hoped to hear. There are so many really good parts I didn't focus on. I figure you need to hear these things first. If I didn't mention it, then let's just say, to me it was very well done and I wouldn't change it.
[Man, that's exactly the stuff we hoped to hear. Thanx for giving such a detailed response.]
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BTW, is the song supposed to be 7:00 minutes long? Mine stops there...abruptly. I didn't read much of what was written already, so I don’t know if you were going for a Serenity Painted Death idea. I tried to keep my opinions as unbiased as possible by not reading the other statements.
Iblys said:http://www.ultimatemetal.com/forum/...?threadid=75596
That's the thread where i posted my band's demo links. It's probably better if you reply in there rather than here...... less threadjacking accusations
TheLedTool said:The song is cool. At first I didn't like the vox, but I adapted.
I should get some decent play with this on Winamp, so thanks for the tune.
enigma_nocurnus said:I'm from Melbourne dude.
YaYo said:Accept criticism, thank them for their input and give a gentle pointer of how you've taken it (ie whether its relevant, or whether you think its entirely accurate). Thats all thats really needed, keep the rest of the stuff as food for thought for us, which is what criticism should be.
YaYo said:Not really 'against' him. But you didnt really accept his comments... or more accurately didnt appear to. Its nothing major, I just didnt think the 'elaboration' was really necessary. Most of the stuff you said in your reply is only of interest to us, not to the person making the criticism. If that makes sense..
Accept criticism, thank them for their input and give a gentle pointer of how you've taken it (ie whether its relevant, or whether you think its entirely accurate). Thats all thats really needed, keep the rest of the stuff as food for thought for us, which is what criticism should be.