Check this out pls.

Move your mic closer to the center of the speaker, it'll clear your guitar tone up nicely, help with the boomyness at 100hz or so, and make the guitars nice and in your face, which this song is begging for.
Needs a bass too. Program them in midi or something in reason, export as a wav and run through Ampeg SVX or something.

Nice riffs, very nice indeed, right up my street. Drums sound good too, but the kick has something slightly metallic about it which I'm not digging too much, but it works overall.

Welcome to the forum too.
 
Yeah, the guitars are a little dull, nice tone though. (maybe position your mic more on axis to the cone? how is it positioned for this?)
 
the metallic sound of the kick is maybe cuz i boosted a little bit arround 3k, and i thought it sounds cool, but i'm gonna get rid of that! i'm actually using impulses, and i'm using guitar hacks impulses-L:centre-1;edge-sneap R:centre-1;edge-sneap. Thank you again!

PS:guitars are quadtracked and panned 100% 80%