Constructive Critisism on my mix

[marathegreat]

Hi I am relatively knew to mixing but have a basic knowledge, Let me know what needs to be worked on for this mix, Its an intro to my bands EP, and eveyrthing was basically recorded 2am in the middle of the bush on a trampoline with a Sm58 going into a pod, lol i know.

 

[ahjteam]

couldn't hear the drums. maybe bring them up a bit

 

[OneDaySky]

Really ambient stuff man, hard to say what to fix or change, thats the beauty of ambient music, its an emotion (if thats what you going for) you wanna bring across.
Maybe record the Guitar picking twice, pan 1 hard left and the other hard right for some stereo image!

 

[Vinny]

couldn't hear the drums. maybe bring them up a bit