Consturctive criticism please

[MegustaMucho]

I never put colors in my drawings, I use different shades of grey and lines and etc, everything with a normal pencil

I like your drawings, but I agree with the others when they say that you have to add details.

 

[Ruins]

and you didnt even link him to meatspin.. rly sad

HAHA i thought of doing it but then i remembered "constructive" thread,
so wtf i don't mind to help him/her out.

 

[~blondie~]

because he lost his other in an eppic battle with his last meal

i had this snake once that lost an eye to a rat. it wasnt really an eppic battle though.

 

[ND24/7]

i had this snake once that lost an eye to a rat. it wasnt really an eppic battle though.

I guess it wasn't really a big snake eh?

As for the drawing, I like the texture on the snake, it's pretty decent. I don't particularly like these kind of drawings cause I'm not a fan of the manga style (which I saw some similiraties with yours) : but you have a certain style which is pretty interesting.

Reminds me of some old Castlevania type of characters and ambiences.

 

[SylviasRavenWolfe]

well thank you everyone, other boards i post in are mean ass fuckers but you guys are actually giving me suggestions!!!
i know i need more detail, i'm working on it.
photoshop is to damned expensive and i only use colored penicil in my sketch book anyway, i do alot of acrylic painting as well though, and every now and then i mae some nice stained glass things.

 

[Nashira]

Would be look better if you add shades and make the color-differences between for example dark-green and light-green stronger.

But anyway, the drawings are good so far.

 

[Xeik]

^^ I think you should join deviantart, that's a huge art community with galleries, prints to buy.. etc.
I myself has a deviantart account, xeikkeiu.deviantart.com ;P

as for the pictures, they are great (I love dark art) but you should try and shade it a little more. You've done them with pencils right? That's a kinda hard medium to use. I recommend you to try digital art, with programs such as photoshop or open canvas. They can be downloaded for free, atleast a trial ^^ Keep up the good work and practice!

 

[SylviasRavenWolfe]

mm im not really into digital art, i like paints and only use colored penicils in my sketch book, and i've tried to get on deviant art numerous times but the site always crashes my computer....

 

[Xeik]

^ aw, too bad then... there's a site called cheesyart too, but I dunno if it's good. You could try.
You don't have to work with digital art to be good! It's just me that thinks it's much easier to paint that way. Maybe because I have a graphire tablet ^^; really useful thing