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[Klosure]

ok my final submission... any comments welcome, i have tried to not go too brutal - I prefer to let the "band" do that and for me to just display the mix of the situation.

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/880876/focus/focus 8.mp3

 

[marios.blythe]

ok my final submission... any comments welcome, i have tried to not go too brutal - I prefer to let the "band" do that and for me to just display the mix of the situation.

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/880876/focus/focus 8.mp3

hey mate you changed the midi drums right?
note that a real drummer cant play double-pedal and hit ''close'' hi-hat the same time..also the song is too dry for my taste

 

[Klosure]

hey mate you changed the midi drums right?
note that a real drummer cant play double-pedal and hit ''close'' hi-hat the same time..also the song is too dry for my taste

Didnt change this midi , unless superior changes it?


https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/880876/focus/focus par.mp3


Anyway... maybe you prefer this?

 

[Mooseman0389]

Hey guys. Might be a little late to the party, but here is my mix! This is the first mix I've had the balls to put up on the site. Let me know what you think!

https://soundcloud.com/pattarpey89/focus

 

[Chris Lucas]

Hey guys. Might be a little late to the party, but here is my mix! This is the first mix I've had the balls to put up on the site. Let me know what you think!

https://soundcloud.com/pattarpey89/focus

I like this mix a lot at first hear. The only thing is that snare drum is fucking opressive to my ears. I love snares that go POP but this one has that really harsh attack at the start that disconnect it from the rest of the mix. It's like the amount of high end it has is distracting compared to the rest of the mix. Also, I'm sure you use all software compressors which have a tendency to do weird shit to transients sometimes when you're really hitting them. Bass and Gtrs are A+ though. Vocals are cool but could be a little bigger I guess? That's merely preference, your vox compliment your mix well.

 

[Mooseman0389]

I like this mix a lot at first hear. The only thing is that snare drum is fucking opressive to my ears. I love snares that go POP but this one has that really harsh attack at the start that disconnect it from the rest of the mix. It's like the amount of high end it has is distracting compared to the rest of the mix. Also, I'm sure you use all software compressors which have a tendency to do weird shit to transients sometimes when you're really hitting them. Bass and Gtrs are A+ though. Vocals are cool but could be a little bigger I guess? That's merely preference, your vox compliment your mix well.

Thanks for the feedback! And yes, sadly everything I do is in the box and my monitoring situation is less than ideal : / I'll revisit the snare and maybe swap out the compressor

 

[xXxMetalJunkiexXx]

Nice!