Critique Agressive Metal

[HostileEx]

Please check out what I have. If you have any advice at all, I'd love to hear it. Have been working on this for a while. The compostion is not complete.

Things bothering me:
Snare
Bass Crunch

 

[HostileEx]

Anybody at all? I'm on vacation for a while and would love to have some ideas when I get back.

 

[oz_golf]

snare is fine but the guitar and bass are problem