Critique my mix (Original Song)

[maestro999]

Hey there. I just finished my mix and I want to release an album with this sound. Tell me what you think.

320 kbps: https://www.dropbox.com/s/85rh6zm8913eg1q/untitled sh 44.mp3?dl=0

 

[Nicholas Hall]

hey sounds great but needs vocals

 

[maestro999]

hey sounds great but needs vocals

Thanks. Yeah I'm planning to add vocals but I haven't found a vocalist yet

 

[Nicholas Hall]

Thanks. Yeah I'm planning to add vocals but I haven't found a vocalist yet

cool. good luck finding one will you be sharing the multitracks when its got vocals ?

 

[maestro999]

cool. good luck finding one will you be sharing the multitracks when its got vocals ?

I wasn't going to, but I could do it if anyone needs them

 

[Korwent]

I'd totally be interested in giving the tracks a shot!
I might be able to hook you up with a vocalist too!

 

[Korwent]

By the way, I'd say I'm mostly not fond of the kick which has a weird mid range, and snare that I think lacks ambiance for that kind of stuff, and has a tad bit too much wires sound in it

 

[maestro999]

I'd totally be interested in giving the tracks a shot!
I might be able to hook you up with a vocalist too!

it would be nice, does he have any demos/recordings?

 

[maestro999]

By the way, I'd say I'm mostly not fond of the kick which has a weird mid range, and snare that I think lacks ambiance for that kind of stuff, and has a tad bit too much wires sound in it

Yeah I agree I probably need to work a bit more on them or replace them with something else, but I want them to stand out. Too many bands sound the same nowadays with their massive drum sound with a lot of ambience.

 

[Korwent]

it would be nice, does he have any demos/recordings?

I totally forgot about that suggestion and just remembered it, in fact I have too people in mind for the clean and harsh vocals!, maybe we could chat a bit more about that depending on what you'd want by PM?