critique my mix please D:

[rancure]

Hey I found this song somewhere in this forum but can't find the original thread anymore :/ sorry for starting a new thread but I would really appreciate if you guys could give me some advices on this mix

and sry for my bad english :|

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/40273441/song17.mp3

 

[Pre Studio Productions]

guitars might be a little too loud
bring up bass a little bit louder
guitar playing is sloppy
bring up your kick
your guitars have a harsh high end. Maybe low pass it a little bit more.