Critique my mix.

Sayalol

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Sep 26, 2015
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Hello,

I've been reading up and practicing mixing and was wondering if you all could listen to my current project and tell me the goods, the bads, and the things that I could try to make it sound better. I'm very new to this and figured I should try some outside ears and ask for advice and tips. Guitars are DI and drums are MIDI through Logic X. I don't have a bass guitar, so I use my electric guitar and DI it to a bass amp setting I made.


https://soundcloud.com/a-past-long-forgotten/higher-tenure

The song itself was written as a joke to my supervisor who's probably being separated from the military due to reaching his higher tenure. I'm still very new to screaming vocals, and clean singing is just there to be a fill. I can't sing.

So, any advice, whether it'd be the recordings, the mixing, or any tips you could give would be awesome. Thank you.