Critique my mixes [3 different songs/mixes]

Jun 16, 2008
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Ok so here's 3 different songs (more like parts of songs I never finished really) each mixed differently. I can probably give details on what I used for each if you want/need them. But first I'd like to hear what people think.

1 - http://dl.dropbox.com/u/16817300/LowtuningLulzM.wav
2 - http://dl.dropbox.com/u/16817300/CruelAsphyxiwank_M.mp3
3 - http://dl.dropbox.com/u/16817300/EvilRuleTheWorldFishThingM.mp3

1 was written when replacing a broken E string, I tuned as far as A (AADGBe) and had a play with it, this came out.

2 and 3 are compositions based on a theme or story some friends gave me to write them about. For those interested, their file names pretty much sum them up.

Also, 1 is the oldest, and 3 the most recent.

Anyway, just looking for opinions and improvements and stuff.

EDIT: Also, my playing is dreadful in some places, just ignore that ;)

Thanks in advance.