Critique my newest mix

[right_to_rage]

I've been working on a new mix, and a few songs while my band gets our material rehearsed. A big challenge for me has been applying what I've read in "The Systematic Mixing Guide" to give myself a template to create from. Give me some pointers, I feel like I'm getting close to something good sounding!

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/81664946/Slim Jim.mp3

Out of the box I'm using a Carvin Fatboy, Ibanez Bass, Axe Fx 2, and Spdif to Focusrite Pro 24. In the box I'm using Logic, AD, a few Waves plugins.

Thank you! :Smokin:

 

[marios.blythe]

very nice sound!
my opinion: replace the snare with one that will sound more ''real''
2 bring up the volume of the bass a little bit!

 

[right_to_rage]

Can you show me a comparison to something that sounds more realistic?

 

[right_to_rage]

Heres another section of the same song, same mix.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/81664946/Slim Jim 2a.mp3

 

[right_to_rage]

Massive bump for the ambience of my last clip!