Critique this mix ?

[WrisTLocK]

Help an old guy learn new tricks
by
Critiquing my home closet studio recording
and
Throwing out any ideas, tips or advice you're willing to share

I'll take all I can get . Thanks !

ALL LIES - OCTAGON

 

[Nikolas Quemtri]

The instrumental mix sounds pretty nice - the bass and the guitars have solid tone.
I'd make the snare a bit fatter (too thin to me currently). Actually, the drums in general, have too generic tone (EZX Pop/Rock).
And the whispered vocal is too sizzling with its highs

 

[WrisTLocK]

The instrumental mix sounds pretty nice - the bass and the guitars have solid tone.
I'd make the snare a bit fatter (too thin to me currently). Actually, the drums in general, have too generic tone (EZX Pop/Rock).
And the whispered vocal is too sizzling with its highs

Thanks for checking it out Nikolas, appreciate your comments !!
Gonna revisit this mix and do some tweakin
\m/ \m/