Darkadian clip, need some input on the flow of the song

[Mattayus]

Some of you may have heard the first couple of minutes already, but I've extended the idea with a few more riffs and arrangement ideas.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/4128689/Fuckin Disgusting.mp3

I dunno... I love the track up until the first chorus, then after that I'm not sure if it's feeling a little disjointed and like I've literally just smashed riffs together without bridging them properly?

Let me know what you think! And if anyone's got any ideas on making it flow a little better then please chime in.

 

[midget donkeys]

Do you have lyrics written yet or know which riffs will have vocals and if so what type of vocals? I think the song sounds really cool, but I could see it being really tough for a vocalist to sing/growl over some of these riffs.

Maybe work out a rough vocal track and see how it flows to you.

 

[Mattayus]

Nah man we're still searching, that's the annoying thing We've been a full line-up minus a vocalist for about 6 months now, possibly more, and still nothing. It would help so much more if someone could lay something down, as none of us are vocalists/lyricists in the slightest!

 

[RichMinerva]

If you fancy going
Over to the mixing thread I posted on here where I posted DI's etc go listen to my vocals. See if you'd like em?

 

[Mattayus]

Haha fuckin ay man. They're a tiny bit on the deathy side for our vibe I think? But If you could scream it up a bit, make it more on the shouty/hardcore/90's metal side (think Anselmo etc?) then that'd be awesome for you to give it a shot!

 

[RichMinerva]

Haha fuckin ay man. They're a tiny bit on the deathy side for our vibe I think? But If you could scream it up a bit, make it more on the shouty/hardcore/90's metal side (think Anselmo etc?) then that'd be awesome for you to give it a shot!

I can but try want to send me a mix to do it over or?! Whatever you fancy
And any preference as to patterns etc

 

[Mattayus]

I can but try want to send me a mix to do it over or?! Whatever you fancy
And any preference as to patterns etc

Just right click > save as on that mp3?
Just make up whatever the fuck dude. It's just for experimental purposes so I'm not really bothered!

 

[RichMinerva]

No worries. In return can I borrow a reampzz for one of my tracks?!

 

[Mattayus]

I don't have re-amp gear at the moment! I should really take that off my sig since I had to have a panic sell-off of some shit But send me DI's and I'll do it with modelling? I know it's "not the same" but I can get great results with it (this clip for example is Peavey ReVaver)

 

[RichMinerva]

I don't have re-amp gear at the moment! I should really take that off my sig since I had to have a panic sell-off of some shit But send me DI's and I'll do it with modelling? I know it's "not the same" but I can get great results with it (this clip for example is Peavey ReVaver)

That's revalver?!

Tits = Blown off.

You teach me how!

 

[Mattayus]

You have revalver? I can send you presets etc?

Also, you might wanna re-download the song, I've changed a few things (not the arrangement though, just drums etc)

 

[Mattayus]

Anyone got any comments on the mix at all? Ignore the low end, it's pitch-shifted guitar at the moment