3 part song ep, need opinions please! (ambient hard/post rock)

[guitarplaya18]

hey, decided to do a little 3 part ep type thing and I have the first two songs done to an extent. Trying to go for a ambient hard/post rock type vibe. The first song is not at all mixed or anything and needs alot of parts re recorded, but here it is. Just would like some opinions on the song and some ideas if yall have any.
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/7077365/Pre Trials v7.mp3

this is the second song, I've posted this one before and it is in the mixin stage, so feel free to post mix tips and well as song tips on this one.
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/7077365/Trials Drums v27.mp3

still working out ideas for the last part, will post eventually


thanks

 

[Backe]

Listened to the first one, and damn... I almost fell asleep, "Tears Don't Fall" by Bullet For My Valentine just ran through my mind the entire time and just sat waiting for something, then the song was over. Mixwise, It's not bad, but not good either. So well...