Craigsnedeker
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Okay, today's post is the month of March, titled Return to Summerland.
This piece is about being away from the Lord for a while (the winter wasteland), and then returning (summer gardens with warm fruit). I wanted to have some art in the calendar that wasnt all dark and gloomy. It was originally titled Leaving Summerland and had a little girl walking out of the nice forest into the gloomy winter, but I changed it to have a happier meaning. The title is a little reference to the Kings X song Summerland. Notice that winter is giving way to summer. My wife thinks that it should be a cover for a Heart album.
The verse:
Restore us, O Lord, and bring us back to you again!
Give us back the joys we once had!
Lamentations 5:21
I'm sorry but it's really not to my liking... I can't be as rough as to say it's BAD, it's just not appealing to me, the last one makes little to no sense.
It's not really the storyline, as I see it each pictures has it's own story easily presented in a quote from the Bible, if I'm not mistaken.
It's just the images are either too flashy, or some parts are sticking out, it's just not working for me and I haven't commented so far thinking it would appeal to me later on, but it didn't, and I even showed the first two images to my friend, who's an art buff of sorts, and he was bold enough to state his disliking. (It's unfair to judge by one opinion, but I used him as an guideline...) I don't find that sort of criticism constructive but I will speak my mind and say it's going a wrong path.
Note: Ryan, if you believe harsh words aren't encouraging opposed to comments of praise you're mistaken. If the artist becomes contempt with himself how is he ever going to improve. I'm not saying this out of spite or malice, I'm just sharing the impression my eyes speak to me. If anything, I'm saying this in a way to assist Prometheus, even tho it seems highly unlikely.
"Try saying something nice for a change"? Spoken like a true kid. I remember when I used to have that kind of unrealistic optimism. Then, I saw the real world.
I've seen more than u could ever imagine. Optimism? LOL! I will not tell you the story though. I've only told a few people. It is way to dark to tell here. I only tell in private chats. good bye.
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