Demo of Song I will Perform at Songwriters Showcase. Please give feedback on mix

[MondoLikeMetal]

This is a mix of a song that I will perform for my college's Songwriter's Showcase. Can I get some feedback on this mix? The song is called "Get Off the Grid."

http://soundcloud.com/devon-vonmonster/

songwriters-showcase-get-off

 

[MondoLikeMetal]

Here is a hotter mix for my song, with guitars turned up, but did I loose the drums? I mixed with headphones, so if you can tell me what needs to come up or down, that would help me out.

 

[benjy]

I don't know but to me the guitars sound like hollow. Do you have a roomy verb on those track? The bass also sound kind of fake to me. I may turn the guitars down a bit I don't you lost the drums but they are a tad quiet in the mix.