Does this mix sound finished? Instrumental prog, AAL/STS fans

[jsaudio]

Hey guys does this sound like a solid mix to you this is a track i am getting ready to release via my solo project and would like your feedback thanks!!

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/9463730/An Amber Echo Final.mp3

 

[Calippo Tecks]

drums are thin, I would work some more on those drums before releasing.
guitars sound quite alright.
those cymbals are too loud compared to the rest of the drums.

 

[DanLights]

I actually like the extreme thinness of the drums, it gives it a very characteristic sound. If you're trying to make them sound real and metal, you're failing, but personally I like how the half electronic-ish and thin drums complement the mix, cause everything in general is quite thinned and I like it for the song, more at the beginning than at the heavier parts. What I don't like though, is the extreme panning of the hihat and other cymbals, it's distracting