Electronic/industrial/whatever song. Don't really know what I'm doing and need help.

[Uladyne]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1238743/046%20subliminal%201.mp3

I know there aren't many "rules" when it comes to this kind of stuff, but I would still like to make this as listenable as possible. It's supposed to be kind of noisy and distorted, and the guitars are supposed to sound fake and digital, but I'm not so sure about the overall sound. Almost sounds like there's a hole somewhere but I can't seem to figure out where or what instrument I should use to try to fill it out.

 

[Uladyne]

Anybodeh?

 

[Black neon bob]

Sounds great to me.. yeah, it is a certain style of music that does not really come with a set of rules, so i would not worry about anything really.. maybe up the guitars a bit in volume to fill up that hole you are talking about? maybe widen the bass a bit?

 

[psyphre]

My thoughts (just kinda stream of conscousness type of thing).

:really dig the vocal sound
:needs more grindy guitars

Other than that, I dig this, listened to it 3 times, if that's indication.

 

[Uladyne]

Sweet. I'll work on the guitars. They're just a mediocre PODxt setting with the cab sim disabled.

 

[Uladyne]

Remix:

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1238743/Subliminal%20Final%20Mix%20Test.mp3