evergrey cover + misc.....

[scyther666]

OK....knowing this is far from great, sweet, nice or even average....still i'd like some feedback on the overall sound....it's not finished but i think that now is a nice time to ask for advice so that i know what i should be looking for next....

It's a part from Evergrey's "December 26th".....it's up to the solo ....

http://sordidpyx.googlepages.com/decemberfinal.mp3

And here's a little bonus....kinda raw sound...messing with a loop....uke:
http://sordidpyx.googlepages.com/Untitled-03.mp3

 

[Cryo114]

Only listened to Evergrey's "December 26th".

iIm only a layman compared to some here but...

It seems to miss some high F clarity, but that may just be down to it being 128kbps. That might also be why the cymbals seem abit wishy, washy. Other than that, i like!

 

[Metaltastic]

Hmm, pretty cool guitar tone - but dear god, lower those cymbals - they'd be too loud even if they sounded good, but the machine-gun type nature of them makes it all the worse. Otherwise, good job, I like the keys!

 

[scyther666]

Thnx to everyone for your time on this one.....
You're all right about the cymbals....way too SHSHSHSHHS...
I didn't take as much time as i should on the drumset....

Thnx again!!