Feedback, opinions, advice and criticism wanted! :)

[dill_the_devil]

Just for a change, I've recorded a little more than a single riff this time - there are three whole riffs, linking together to form something that, after a shitload of work, may be the skeleton of a song waiting to be fleshed out. Haven't written any lead guitar for this yet (mainly 'cos I'm an even worse lead guitarist than I am a rhythm guitarist), so all we have is drums programmed with Leafdrums 2.2, one track of bass guitar and four tracks of rhythm, all through Guitarport and mixed with Adobe Audition.

http://www.geocities.com/philwhitehouse/demo5.mp3 - This one was recorded and really roughly mixed in about twenty minutes...

http://www.geocities.com/philwhitehouse/demo5b.mp3 - And this version is a tweaked one I spent a little time with tonight, bringing out the bass guitar and snares a little more.

Cheers!

 

[Fabbio]

The pages you posted the tracks on don't visualize....

 

[dill_the_devil]

There are no pages - I just use the account for mp3 storage and directly link to them, since I have no other webspace.

 

[Nitronium Blood]

This page is not available.

 

[dill_the_devil]

Weird, works for me...

 

[kaomao]

Just for a change, I've recorded a little more than a single riff this time - there are three whole riffs...

Well to me the first mix sounds a lot better, it has got a more clear sound.
the second one is just a little bit muddy.

Maurizio

 

[johnzorn]

Hey Dill,
You tunes are always getting better and tighter. You still need to get Drumkit From Hell though Also you should post some of you GuitarPort/Pod patches. Keep up the metal

 

[SteelRat]

Sounds good, I'd say a little less of the kick drum and the toms, more brightness on the snare, more reverb on the cymbals and hi hat. Maybe not as wide a stereo image on the toms, but that's all to taste, anyway...

Sounds great, though...I really like Audition...you can do good stuff with it.

 

[dill_the_devil]

Thanks guys! I'm gonna go back and work on this some more tonight - I'm gonna try and write some lead guitar and maybe add another couple of sections to the track, plus clean up the mix some more. Gotta do some album reviews for UM first though, damnit...

 

[DIOBOLIC5150]

Well.. I wanna hear it too but the page won't load.

 

[dill_the_devil]

Geocities servers seem to be going on the blink somewhat lately... dunno whether just trying a 'save target as...' would work... I'm really gonna try and find better file hosting soon, it's just that I have a budget of precisely zero to work with, what with debts to pay off and a pretty small wage...