New mix - feedback and tips would be appreciated!

[dill_the_devil]

Hi guys - haven't posted anything in a while, since I've been uber-busy with work and promo reviews for Ultimate Metal... so, here's a riff I cobbled together some time last week - I dithered with the mix for a while until I came up with this.

http://www.geocities.com/philwhitehouse/demo8b.mp3

As usual, 4 tracks of rhythm guitar recorded using my Line6 Guitarport, 1 track of bass recorded the same way, and Leafdrums 2.2 provided the backing. All was recorded and mixed using Adobe Audition.

The guitars were panned 100% and 55% left and right.

Any tips, feedback, criticisms, suggestions, marriage proposals or entreaties to stop putting you guys through this amateurish crap are welcomed and encouraged.

 

[estigma2001]

i couldnt download it!!!!!!!!!

 

[Nuk3m]

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[Kazrog]

You should set up a PureVolume and/or MySpace page. They are free and won't restrict your bandwidth.

 

[MKS]

I posted it on my server for ya. Let me know if and when you need it removed.

http://www.mksstudios.com/demo8b.mp3

 

[Mendel]

nice riffing dude. the basedrum should be a bit les * bassy * .
mayby a little more treble on base kick and snare drum.

 

[dill_the_devil]

I posted it on my server for ya. Let me know if and when you need it removed.

http://www.mksstudios.com/demo8b.mp3

Thanks MKS, that's very much appreciated!

Kazrog - here's the MySpace link - http://www.myspace.com/destroysomethingbeautifuluk

Mendel - thanks for the tips, I'll have another go at this when I get chance.

Anyone else, now the riff's more accessible?

 

[The Recorder]

Veeery nice riffs!

 

[dill_the_devil]

*takes a bow* Thanks!